Wednesday, 4 February 2015

@Phil : FSTS: Script edited.

I took into account what Phil commented on for my first draft and have taken out a few actions and camera shots to make the first scene shorter as it didnt seem that the zombie was coming into action quick enough. I also have removed the ''tearing flesh'' and the word ''shit'' as it's not suitable for a little girl to say and to imagine on a more vivid scale.

No comments:

Post a Comment