Some people couldn't view the video so I posted it on here. I have already received some feedback about slowing the speed down to give it some more reading time. I just wanted to know if this was right as this is the first animatic I have attempted. The sound is not edited fully as I just wanted to see if I was doing this right and if it was clear (other than being to fast). Thanks.
Test animatic from Julia Mason on Vimeo.