Hi Julia - okay - I think the 'cream is too grey - it looks a bit miserable to me - I guess, white on white is a challenge, but if you made it the colour of whole milk/double cream - a touch of yellow/vanilla I think that would be more appetising! Also - just to add a bit of interest to the model, I'd suggest you need to add some addition back lines suggestive of flutes/ridges/patters around the side of the bowl - so something emulating this: https://images-na.ssl-images-amazon.com/images/I/81tPIKBIDyL._SL1500_.jpg - it will make the bowl read much more as a container - just a few vertical lines (not all the same) running around the sides of the bowl, something like that?
Also, right now, your black lines look too angular - can you smooth?
Hi Julia - okay - I think the 'cream is too grey - it looks a bit miserable to me - I guess, white on white is a challenge, but if you made it the colour of whole milk/double cream - a touch of yellow/vanilla I think that would be more appetising! Also - just to add a bit of interest to the model, I'd suggest you need to add some addition back lines suggestive of flutes/ridges/patters around the side of the bowl - so something emulating this: https://images-na.ssl-images-amazon.com/images/I/81tPIKBIDyL._SL1500_.jpg - it will make the bowl read much more as a container - just a few vertical lines (not all the same) running around the sides of the bowl, something like that?
ReplyDeleteAlso, right now, your black lines look too angular - can you smooth?