tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3035041836736573810.post6566072308812767942..comments2023-05-24T15:30:20.127+01:00Comments on Julia Mason: Prep for first OGR - Opinions? Julia Masonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08064053711912076886noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3035041836736573810.post-51514529797995264482015-01-20T18:17:12.697+00:002015-01-20T18:17:12.697+00:00I think you should put the scenes about her rope b...I think you should put the scenes about her rope being taken away and her having to fight with bare hands into the Step Outline, as this is a crucial moment in your story and you should make sure that all four lengths / versions of stories you have fit well together and have the same feeling, as the step outline seems very vague in my opinion. Keep it up!Mailin Berghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11589614045284458779noreply@blogger.com