tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3035041836736573810.post3549533608843010255..comments2023-05-24T15:30:20.127+01:00Comments on Julia Mason: Fritz Lang's Metropolis Film Review (1927)Julia Masonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08064053711912076886noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3035041836736573810.post-87671753411126899422014-10-01T11:29:11.868+01:002014-10-01T11:29:11.868+01:00Ah, well that's understandable, I did consider...Ah, well that's understandable, I did consider that but it completely passed my mind about concerning people who are ignorant of movies But in any case, thank you for the feedback. <br />Julia Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08064053711912076886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3035041836736573810.post-65998638527942068022014-10-01T06:47:24.305+01:002014-10-01T06:47:24.305+01:00PS...don't worry about re-editing previous rev...PS...don't worry about re-editing previous reviews, just take the comments and move forward :) Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3035041836736573810.post-65165557493524513582014-10-01T06:34:37.204+01:002014-10-01T06:34:37.204+01:00Very nice Julia- this sounds so much more academic...Very nice Julia- this sounds so much more academic :)<br /><br />Just a couple of things - make sure that you label all the images (you have forgotten Fig 3), and try and refer to them within the text, for example '...as seen in Fig.2'. This is especially useful when you are talking about the visuals of the film, for example, the Deco architecture, or the style of the robot. <br /><br />Talking about robots, always assume that your audience comes to the film absolutely ignorant of everything... you say that the film '...sparked the influence for C-3PO'. You need a reference to tell your reader what this 'C-3PO' is, so maybe '...sparked the influence for the droid called C-3PO,(Star Wars, 1977)'.<br /><br />Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13332181835614441447noreply@blogger.com